Sunday, April 25, 2010

Revision Letter- Blog # 4

My research paper was about bottled water- "Drinking Bottled Water is Not the Healthiest Choice"
The topics that I discussed in my paper were false advertisement, less regulated, and health concerns. In my research paper, I didn't discuss on the topic Bisphenol A (BPA) which is a chemical that leach into bottled water. My next revised paper, I will focus on several topics:
  1. The materical that is used to make plastic bottles such as polycarbonate.
  2. How polycarbonate leach BPA into the liquid of bottled water.
  3. Describe what is BPA.
  4. How BPA affects humans.
  5. The government stance on BPA.

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